Monday, September 26, 2011

Poetry Critique Animation

23 comments:

  1. Slumbering restlessly under visions of nostalgic memories she lies. Emotions that comfort and control her subconscious mind bring a sad relief into the warmth of her bed. The simple pleasure of knowing familiarity ceases the roaming appendages and flickering brain into a finally peaceful state.

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  2. Zombies,
    Imaginative and full of energy from another life,
    seemingly scary and hurtful,
    even the most foul creatures play.
    Their efforts are easily understood,
    they want to be funny and positive,
    they want to break from the
    traditional storyline
    and be
    humanized.

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  3. 1.creepy
    2.oldfashioned
    3.dark
    4.rotten
    5.damp
    6.fragile
    7.shaky
    8.brave
    9.empty
    10.quick

    a creepy hand rises from the rotten emptiness,
    the dark , damp, grave is shaky,
    grey skies and a sleeping bird,
    for brave soldiers , this fragile creature
    makes a quick end to the gloomy day,
    to start a party in an old fashioned way

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  4. disjointed, gory, humorous, eerie, amusing, scary, disgusting, alarming, spooky, apprehensive

    The spooky and eerie scene gave an apprehensive feeling in the night. The disgusting creature moved about in a disjointed way. His gory attack on the dark bird was an alarming event to witness. As the killer walked on, more of its' kind ventured out and created an amusing, humourous dancing spectacle.

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  5. The intriguing declaration brought about a dark and anamorphic creation.
    Connected by a butterflies evolution gives insight to the craftsman's movement.
    And the smooth yet dynamic transition speak to a depth unknown by others.

    intriguing
    dark
    morphic
    deep
    insightful
    moving
    attractive
    craftsmanship
    smooth
    thoughtful
    connected
    butterfly
    evolution
    dynamic

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  6. It was an ever so spooky night.

    Full of energy and extraterrestrial.

    Pacing back and fourth, trying to shake the eerie vibe... without warning a wild bird was in flight.

    The alien fought creative and some may say extreme.

    After the bird had died, the night was no longer as somber as it seemed.

    The music blared and the fun began.

    Just what you'd expect from an eccentric alien.

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  7. At midnight, when the strange happenings begin,
    It would be fine, until the moment when
    Intense
    Awesome
    Fun
    Chaotic
    Strange
    Spooky
    Party
    Scary
    Surprise

    A green hand from the soil is thrust
    And turns a surprise bird attack to dust.
    The monster moves on with an intense walk,
    The scene's chaotic enough to make anyone balk,
    Until the lights go down and the music advances
    And the zombie's friends begin their spooky dances.
    It wouldn't be a party if it wasn't scary.
    It's only awesome if someone's slimy or hairy.

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  8. The playful zombie aggressively smoked the spooky bird exciting an enthusiastic celebratory dance with his slimy friends under the dark dreamy sky with their feet keeping rhythm on the textured ground

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  9. This dreamy film was purely wonderful, although fast and static, it was meaningful. Blurry at times, made it a bit confusing, obviously the creator was thoughtful or inspirational at the core, overall very comforting.

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  10. Quiet, sad, scary, humorous, silly, green, gross, explosive, colorful, festive.

    The quiet gross green.
    Emerging as explosively humorous.
    Scary diminished as silly evolved.
    Sad transformed to colorfully festive.
    The quiet gross green.

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  11. As deep and ominous as it began,
    As clean and elegant it developed,
    As strong and graceful it ended,
    It was such an insightful,
    Delightful movie,
    With a reminiscent eerie feeling.

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  12. Resonating
    Meaningful
    Personal
    Symbolic
    Narrative
    Hopeful
    Futuristic
    Experience
    Impression
    Impactful


    Sharing a personal experience that had impacted her life,
    Leigh’s meaningful narrative sheds lights on the impression actions can have.
    The symbolic nature adds to the profoundness of the piece
    left resonating within even long after it’s end…
    Causing one to ponder the implications of its futuristic, hopeful ending.

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  13. Riveting, Inventive Tales
    draw the viewer in.
    Active, Dreamlike State of the Piece
    invite the viewer to stay.
    Creatively, the Glowing Blurry Unicorn
    causes the viewer to fall in love.
    Deeply and Effectively the Cute Film Ends
    leaving the viewer hoping for more.

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  14. The gooey creepy hand appeared out of the ground
    Setting a suspenseful scene for the viewers around.
    The zombie may have seemed a bit morbid
    But instead he turned out to be pretty groovy dead kid.
    It was funny and exciting to see the zombies have a dance party
    It’s nice to think of zombies as being goofy and hearty.

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  15. The sadly scary figure walked along the dark and gloomy field of death. While aimlessly walking bumped into a funky but spunky circle.
    The funny creatures danced happily,
    While swaying to a playful tone.

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  16. First grotesque, and green, it turns explosive, so amusing! Impulsive and happy, we suddenly join in a festive meeting of blobby forms, so full of glee and playful.

    green
    grotesque
    blobby
    explosive
    amusing
    impulsive
    happy
    sudden
    playful
    gleeful

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  17. A grungy zombie on a film so gritty,
    Colorful and comical, a piece Gumby left behind,
    A musical narrative about brains so witty,
    Green gross hands, the ridiculous to remind,
    Myself of cartoonish shows I thought so pretty,
    In a primitive time I joyously find,
    Dead men dance in a nearby city,
    Where a bird was lost for all time.

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  18. Eerie, Gross, Scenic, Absurd, Unbelievable, Festive, Vibrant, Immersive and Bird-hating

    The perpetually gross claw,
    found breath in an eerie bog.
    An absurd scenic environment,
    How unbelievable, no denying it.
    With festivities in tow,
    new vibrant skin glow
    How immersive, no denying it
    what a bird-hating retirement.

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  19. The creepy zombie hand pulls you into a playful world.
    You meet a adorable, fun, and clever zombie.
    More funny colorful zombies appear filled with happiness making dancing movements.

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  20. A hand reaches out in a gruesome manner
    The zombie looks around in a curious fashion
    Cute and clever, this creature destroys all his foes
    Suddenly, here comes his funny bunnies
    A playful party starts off with dancing
    An abrupt end to this happy party

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  21. Pena stop-motion
    Cleverly spooky zombie
    Prancing around with his gory adorable face
    His outrageous moves, MJ would be frightened
    With dark scene littered with odd Christmas lights
    This creepy zombie is not so somber after all

    Cleverly, spooky, gory, adorable, outrageous,
    Frightened, dark, odd, creepy, somber

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  22. A dark evening, driving was a mistake
    A crash unexpected
    Broken and battered
    Recovery, long and difficult
    Much better in the end
    Impacted lives
    Unforgotten story.

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  23. Warmth of her bed so inviting
    never wants to leave
    always dreaming, wishing the world was the same when she wakes
    full of yearning she tosses and turns
    nothing is as great as the calming and whimsical state of sleep
    toilsome, she attempts to awake only to fall back into her dreamlike state of being.

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